Last Night …. In the Garden

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I cherish these words so much.

Last night, in the garden,
I have offered my youth's foamy wine.
You have put my glass in your lips, you have closed the eyes…
and you have smiled…

Besotted of you, I have raised your veil
and I have untied your braids

and your dress has fallen to the floor…

You, sweet and silent,
you have put your face on my naked chest…

… and I have found the sky inside you…

… last night, when the dreams of the World
they were lit by the light of the Moon…

… last night, you and me… in the garden…
0n'an

Love
Fati

8 Replies to “Last Night …. In the Garden”

  1. Right on. I like it. Ive never had a poem written for me. Oh yeah my lunch date went very well. Thanks for wishing me luck, I definately needed it.

  2. That was so sweet of him to do that for you. mushy mushy! lol:heart:Sarah

  3. HI Sarah,I was blown away when he told me these were his words and I guess I inspired him too since I know the night he wrote this poem.I just hope he is doing ok and not to sick since he isn’t online now and tomorrow will be 5 days 🙁 I hope all will pray for his recovery ..Thank you Sarah for being a great friend/daughter :)I hope your Angel is doing better now too.love Fatimah

  4. HI Affiliate,I am happy to hear your date went well I hope you didn’t spend all your winning at that lunch 🙂 thanks for reading and commenting.Fatimah

  5. HI Ramute.thank you for alway and I mean always enjoying my posts.. you are a great lady and a good friend.I am so blessed with the friends I have here in Opera.Love to youFatimah

  6. Hi Fatimah!This poem is beautiful. he has a lot of warmth and emotions in himself. He is simply beautiful…

  7. HI Andreu,Yes .. On’an has so much of everything inside him and I am so blessed I am part of his insides now too 🙂 He is a good man and I pray for him to recover soon I think he is in the hospital again 🙁 Thank you for commenting always Fatimah

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